Momentarily Lost in New Mexico
Momentarily Lost in New Mexico
We flew laughing
down a thousand miles of highway
slicing cities, deserts, and mountain ranges neatly in two
then watching them close seamlessly behind us
again and again.
Slept in the cab of your pickup
crushed against the doors, the gearshift, each other
Until discomfort and the sunrise
woke me to a day
that begged the rememberance of innocence
Like white-cotton t-shirts stretched across
warm, sun-brown skin
and the smell of mud-pies we baked in your back yard
decorated with tiny yellow flowers, weeds
from the empty lot next door.
Wincing, I shook the blood back into my legs
gathered my toothbrush, backpack
and made my way to another rest-stop bathroom
wondering once again
exactly where I was.
-c. bottlecappie
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another one from the vaults. hope you enjoy it.
May 15, 2008 at 4:19 pm
Pretty close to perfect cappie. You’re really good at this.
May 15, 2008 at 6:59 pm
Really great visuals. Thanks. I was right there with you the whole way, and there is no greater compliment than that…
May 16, 2008 at 1:35 am
This is beautiful… love the imagery in this.