* my attempt at a Haiku

Gossamer petals
A transitory beauty
Withering and bruised
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May 14, 2008 at 4:16 pm
perfection… no attempt about it…..
May 14, 2008 at 6:04 pm
Great job.. the picture is a perfect partner for this poem. (Love my alliteration? LOL)