http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/true-dat/ surviving ourselves despite ourselves Thu, 24 Jul 2008 22:08:17 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/true-dat/#comment-88 Marissa Miller Mon, 12 May 2008 15:48:37 +0000 http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-88 Nice. Nice.

]]> http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/true-dat/#comment-70 beartwinsmom Sat, 10 May 2008 02:56:17 +0000 http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-70 I could hear the bass beat when I was reading this. If I were teaching college English, I'd use this poem as an example of excellent 1st person poetry. I could hear the bass beat when I was reading this. If I were teaching college English, I’d use this poem as an example of excellent 1st person poetry.

]]> http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/true-dat/#comment-69 polisny Fri, 09 May 2008 18:42:06 +0000 http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-69 Good poem !! Nice rhythm and in the end, a parable. Fun to read, as languag goes. Of today, which actually says a lot. Also, in the writing, we sense that the poet really is more educated than the language put fourth. Good job! Keep writing and analyzing what you write. Poems like this are great because they actually talk to people not only in a beautiful way, but also in a way that they can understand. Good poem !!
Nice rhythm and in the end, a parable. Fun to read, as languag goes. Of today, which actually says a lot. Also, in the writing, we sense that the poet really is more educated than the language put fourth. Good job! Keep writing and analyzing what you write. Poems like this are great because they actually talk to people not only in a beautiful way, but also in a way that they can understand.

]]> http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/2008/05/09/true-dat/#comment-68 Greybeard Fri, 09 May 2008 18:41:58 +0000 http://aldeposo.wordpress.com/?p=44#comment-68 I think I'd have called it 2-4-1. One takin' the dirt nap, one never gettin' out. Except where I live they do get out. Sooner than later too. The streets have never been more dangerous. Just for today I'm glad I realize I'm entirely too old to be anywhere near that ridiculous scene. I just turned 46 a couple months back and am looking forward to dying in my own bed or at least at a time and place of my choosing. I think I’d have called it 2-4-1. One takin’ the dirt nap, one never gettin’ out. Except where I live they do get out. Sooner than later too. The streets have never been more dangerous. Just for today I’m glad I realize I’m entirely too old to be anywhere near that ridiculous scene. I just turned 46 a couple months back and am looking forward to dying in my own bed or at least at a time and place of my choosing.

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